Writing/Art/Lettering
by J.M. DeSantis
Published
by Rosarium Publishing
I
enjoy reading stories from independent companies because they can
take risks with stories. For the average reader it might be a
dangerous investment and this idea probably explains why many people
do not support indie print. Personally, I enjoy traveling to new
places with stories that might be unfamiliar with me. Even if the
story isn't as good as I expect it to be, usually the time and place
is enough for me to continue to read said comic. The best part is
that despite what people might say, there are plenty of stories that
will be new to us that need to be told.
Chadhiyana
is one of those stories. I will admit the first several pages, I was
completely confused as to what was going on. I was about to put it
down because there was no dialogue to go along with the artwork. I
realized I had to be patient. As soon as the dialogue came in, J.M.
DeSantis was able to flesh out the story and give the reader enough
information to explain the first half of the book.
DeSantis
did a wonderful job keeping the tension during the dialogue. There
was a sense of urgency between the characters that will keep the
reader engaged. At the end of the story, everything was able to be
put together. It is difficult to explain a story in an unfamiliar
world in 35 pages. DeSantis did a great job of this. The story
centers around a small group of mystics named the Tal-Ifatiir. They
travel the world combating users of evil magic.
The
artwork is amazing. I love how DeSantis uses the eyes to express the
emotions of the characters. I really enjoy the costumes. It borrows
from many cultures and makes the members of Tal-Ifatiir look both
scholarly and warrior like. In the first half of the story, the
members of Tal-Ifatiir fight with weapons. In the second half, there
is a battle of wits. DeSantis begins the story with fast moving
combat. In the later half, DeSantis slows it down and we see the
Tal-Ifatiir spar verbally with a village elder who they are trying to
help and later between themselves. There is inner turmoil within the
Tal-Ifatiir due to a disagreement of ideologies and purpose. In the
first issue, the reason is vague but the argument gets personal until
the protagonist is discussed after a mission debrief.
Overall,
the story draws you in and keeps you hooked. The best part is that
the protagonist Chadhiyana isn't revealed until the end of the story
even though she is introduced in the beginning. I thoroughly enjoyed
how this was fleshed out. She is not discussed by her fellow
Tal-Ifatiir until the end. As she is described by one of her team
members, the reader will recall her actions from the beginning of the
story. DeSantis provides just enough information to take away the
mystery. I enjoy this world of Chadhiyana and the Tal-Ifatiir. While
the first issue is a small glimpse of that world, what has already
been revealed is just enough for the reader to pick up the subsequent
issues.
1 comment:
Well I'm sold.
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